Home for the Holidays by Sarah Brentyn | Day 2 | Advent Calendar 2016

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Advent Calendar 2016

Day 2 | Advent Calendar

Home for the Holidays by Sarah Brentyn

My sister wakes me.

She puts a finger to her lips and we pad down the hall in our fleece footie pyjamas. It is still dark so she holds my hand on the stairs.

Our parents stand in the dining room. I feel strange—like it’s snowing inside. There is quiet and cold. Our da stares at something on the floor: a Christmas stocking.

I don’t understand why it’s in our house. We don’t have stockings. Or a tree with ornaments.

“There’s a note,” Da says.

My sister points to the shattered window. We are not welcome here.


Author Bio:

Sarah BrentynI wrote my first story when I was nine years old and have never looked back. My work has appeared both online and in print in lit mags, newsletters, websites, newspapers, and anthologies. I have a master’s degree in writing and have taught all ages, from Kindergarteners to adults. When other girls dreamt of being a ballerina, I dreamt of scribbling my thoughts in a notebook and turning them into a book. I bleed ink.

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19 responses to “Home for the Holidays by Sarah Brentyn | Day 2 | Advent Calendar 2016”

  1. willowdot21 Avatar

    Reblogged this on willowdot21 and commented:
    Hi Again, here is the second day of Solveig Werner’s at https://solveigwerner.com Advent Clandar! Day 2 by Sarah Brentyn. I shall be trying to reblog the entries daily! By the way my entry is December 22nd. Happy Advent . Enjoy. xxx

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  2. willowdot21 Avatar

    Hello Sarah and Solveig. Sarah this is a very thought provoking piece. It shows not everything about this mean old world changes for Christmas. The fact I’d very little changes. Thank you for making us think. xxx

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    1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

      Thank you. ❤ I really appreciate this comment. I know a piece about intolerance this time of year isn't super cheerful but it's there and I'm glad it was thought-provoking for you. Looking forward to reading your entry. Thanks for the reblog!

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  3. TanGental Avatar

    damn she’s good; I tell her all the time, I convince myself that I can write okay pieces and then she does this to me. Ha! Off to my burrow… Well done to both. Grrrr

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    1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

      Aaw… Thank you. You are just asking for more emoji hearts. ❤

      Seriously, thanks, Geoff. You know I do love flash but also, although not "in the holiday spirit", I feel this piece is important. And you can (and do) write amazing flash fiction.

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      1. TanGental Avatar

        The truth sometimes surprises huh!!?

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  4. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

    Thank you so much, Solveig, for having me over for tea and allowing me to share a little flash fiction for the holidays. ❤ You pieced this together beautifully. It looks lovely.

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    1. Solveig Avatar

      It is such a pleasure to have you!

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  5. Robyn Haynes Avatar

    I love Sarah’s writing Solveig. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

      Thank you kindly. ❤️

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  6. Eric Klingenberg Avatar

    Very spooky, I like it.

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    1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

      I suppose that first part is a bit eerie. Hadn’t thought about it that way. Glad you liked it. Thanks! 🙂

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  7. Corina Avatar

    This is a good reminder that not everyone has a happy Christmas (season) and not all are bearers of good will during this season. It’s sad but it is a reminder that we need to be vigilant and we also need to have compassion for those who are struggling with the not so merry part of the season.

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    1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

      It is sad but, you’re right, we need compassion. Empathy, understanding, acceptance of those “different” from us in some way. ❤

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  8. Silver Screenings Avatar

    Love the twist at the end. A sobering message – hatred does not take a holiday.

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    1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

      Thank you. ❤️ And, no, it does not. So true.

      Liked by 1 person

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