An unlikely death

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She dried her tears with her handkerchief.

There he lay, helpless, lifeless, cold, so fragile and so small in his wafer thin coffin.
He, who had been her best friend, her true love, her soulmate, her little brother, her twin.

Mother had always been worried about his health. The doctor had told them more than once, that they would be lucky if he reached the age of 7. But, he also underlined that it was unlikely that he would.

She thought of him. He had always enjoyed life, every single breath of it. They used to run through fields of dandelions, usually he was lagging behind panting. She never cared about his weaknesses, they had no impact on her unconditional love for him. And now, now his life had all the sudden come to a halt.

Instead of celebrating their birthday together, she was there to mourn his death. All of the birthday guests where now here for the funeral. But no one was sad, except for her.

He who had always been warned about dying too early, was never truly afraid of death. Maybe that was why death had always avoided him, until now.

She kissed his cold forehead and whispered: “Happy one hundredth birthday!”


Story and photo (hosted on flickr) by Solveig Werner

10 responses to “An unlikely death”

  1. joannesisco Avatar

    I LOVED the ending. What a delightful surprise 🙂

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    1. Solveig Avatar

      Thank you! I wanted to have a nice surprise at the end.

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  2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

    Beautiful. A poignant and heartfelt story. I too loved the twist at the end. You created a wonderful picture here 🙂

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  4. April Munday Avatar

    A very poignant, sweet short story.

    We’re fellow party goers at Suzie’ blog party. Nice to meet you.

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    1. Solveig Avatar

      Thank you so much! It’s one of my earlier stories from when this blog was still young. Nice to meet you too! Have a great party 🙂

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  5. Joan Avatar

    Great story. Wonderfully unexpected ending! 🙂

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    1. Solveig Avatar

      Thank you Joan. I am glad you liked it 🙂

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      1. Joan Avatar

        You’re welcome 🙂

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        1. Solveig Avatar

          😊

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